When there is little time left
To leave your mark in the world
You can’t help but
Recall every missed opportunity
And failure to prove hate demurred.
I’ve no concern with fame
Nor the acknowledgement of a good deed
Rather,
showing love to every
Single
person, of every single creed.
The world is a place
Filled with people that lie
Cruel
kindness surrounds them
Like
the mal intent of a fire.
As time
runs away
It feels like I’ve lost a battle
Because to those missed opportunities
Was I a benevolent
example?
In the
Book, above all else
It says
love your neighbor as yourself
When there is little time left
Did you
leave pride on the shelf?
Anaphora: lines 9-10 Repetition of “every single” at the
beginning of successive clauses. The effect is to stress that no one will be
excluded
Oxymoron: line 12 “Cruel kindness” is a contradiction,
describing the way some people disguise their viciousness with nice appearances
or kind words.
Simile: lines 12-13 Comparison of cruel kindness of a person
and the way fire surrounds something.
Personification: line 14 Giving “time” the human
characteristic of running, implying that it is something that goes fast.
Allusion: lines 18-19 “The Book” is an allusion to the Bible
and a reference to Mark 12:31
Diction: Line 17 The word benevolent is a much stronger word
than “nice” or “kind”
Symbolism: line 21 Leaving pride on a shelf is just a
symbol, not actually leaving something on a shelf, but the idea that you can
leave pride behind and do what’s right.